OH MY ENGLISH!

Assalam~

does my english is alright?

 i dont think so~ 

so..
from now on..
ILL TRY!
ill try my best to write in english...
so everyone can read it.. *even a lot of grammar mistakeS*
and i really need your help!
seriously...
if you correct mine~ and your English will be improve to...
so can you??
HELP ME!!